Alright guys...Cassie, my lovely Cassie, has a propensity for awkward accidents - unintended klutziness and collateral damage.
Cyrus happens to be the unwitting recipient.
Cyrus, the rebellious womanizer, son of the headmaster, wants his revenge.
But how to make his approach sound more like a panther stalking his prey and less like a rape-y stalker with malevolent intentions. Rather, how to make him not come across creepy and perverted.
Because that's how he's playing out so far. Perhaps I need to revisit BTN to see how I handled it there. Or just rewrite a scene or two. Because heaven knows, mama don't write no weirdos....although, I certainly write like a weirdo. Yikes. I believe my baby scrambled my brains a little while she was bouncing around in my belly.
And with this post, I have now had my eyes opened up to the fact that these names are a little....well, not jelling in one respect. Raven and Ryder, Cassie and Cyrus. What the what?!? Definitely not my intention, guys. Definitely not.
Do I want to change them...? I'm kind of attached by now. What do you think??
Oy vey.
Fun times. 😉
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